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04/09/08
The sound of gunfire echoed through the streets, against the bricks, within the little shack that she had retreated to.
She wasn’t out there, where she should have been. Instead, she was in here, with her ear pressed against the peeling white paint of the wooden door, her heart hammering against her broken ribs.
“You’re running,” his voice stated from behind her.
The thudding of her heart stopped completely and she couldn’t breathe. Her neck snapped around and her eyes locked with his. She didn’t take in the way that he casually leaned against the grimy kitchen table, his fingers gripping the linoleum, his legs crossed, one over the other, straight, knees locked. She couldn’t move her eyes from his unreadable face.
She hadn’t known that he was the enemy, that he worked for the other side, that he was supposed to be the one to end her life. Despite being trained to suspect anyone and everyone, from the elderly man crossing the busy road with his walker to the giggling girl on the swing set with her father, she hadn’t had any inkling. All she had known was the sweetness of the maple sugar that coated his lips, the thrill of his hands running up and down her body (so different from the thrill of killing), and the explosion that had overtaken her senses the night that she had broken into his metal safe, finding her picture tacked there, marking her as his assigned target.
And now she would die.
©2008-2009 ~JessicaDanielle
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Author's Comments

Okay, wrote this . . . a month ago? Yeah, a bit more. I put the date on everything, either out of habit or just because I like knowing.
So, anyway, one day I was walking to class and I suddenly have this whole scene laid out for me! Usually when this happens, it's for a story I'm already working on, but this scene came out of nowhere, with characters whose names I never decided on. I wrote it up because it was really good -- came up with a good portion of a plot surrounding this one scene as well, but I figured it would be too much like "Mr. and Mrs. Smith" or something. One of those cheesy murder mystery romance novels. So I decided against taking it anywhere.
Wasn't planning on posting it (since I'm paranoid, and thought that it might turn up in a novel of mine one day), but it got into the Mind's Eye, my school's student creativity book (or something like that; what exactly is it, anyway?).
Didn't get anything back from the teacher at first, so I got really depressed and began rethinking my whole life plan, because I thought that this must mean I wasn't as great of a writer as I thought. But, then, as I was typing up some poetry of Hayley's for the final copy of the book, Mrs. Hafner just sort of nonchalantly handed my scraplet of a short story back, which remade the whole of my day, which had been ruined. No idea why I got it back late, but I was really happy that I got it at all!! :)

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:iconlieano:
Yay for the Minds Eye making people feel good about themselves. X33
It was good. ^^

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~ :heart: Misty Lieano
:iconzeratul7:
Wow, that's dark. But awes writing. I believe that you are an excellent writer, btw. ^^
:iconjessicadanielle:
Aw, thank you so much! I'm pretty sure you're my biggest fan!

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~JessicaDanielle

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